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I wrote some Haikus. I don’t really want to post them, but my friends say they are good so I will post a few and let you decide.

 

You don’t understand

How strongly I feel for you

If only you knew

 

Thousands of words known

But none of them can describe

Who you are to me

 

You are so clever

Not realizing this is a

Haiku about you

 

I have tons more but I’m much too shy about my poetry.

Please tell me what you think.

Thanks!

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9 Comments

    • teh rainbow-esque fi
    • Posted October 19, 2010 at 8:24 pm
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    :D

  1. Nice job

  2. Very nice.

  3. beautiful words.
    love the flow.

  4. This is absolutely stunning and very witty…please dont stop writing and never ever be shy about your work anymore for they are superb…(true words)

    Cheers!

  5. It’s good to see you have kept to the syllable count. Keep writing!

  6. third one was celever and rest were honest :) do post more !!

  7. cool

  8. great one


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