I wrote some Haikus. I don’t really want to post them, but my friends say they are good so I will post a few and let you decide.
You don’t understand
How strongly I feel for you
If only you knew
Thousands of words known
But none of them can describe
Who you are to me
You are so clever
Not realizing this is a
Haiku about you
I have tons more but I’m much too shy about my poetry.
Please tell me what you think.
Thanks!
9 Comments
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Nice job
Very nice.
beautiful words.
love the flow.
This is absolutely stunning and very witty…please dont stop writing and never ever be shy about your work anymore for they are superb…(true words)
Cheers!
It’s good to see you have kept to the syllable count. Keep writing!
third one was celever and rest were honest :) do post more !!
cool
great one
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